Hi! Chloe
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Hi! Chloe
It's been a week since we had a class last week. I've been enjoying beautiful spring weather and cherry blossoms nowadays it had rained a couple of days ,though. I visited a zoo in my city to view the spring flowers with my sister last week. My mother pouted after she found out my excursion with my sister, so I plan to go to see camellia flowers and barley field in the countryside this week. I prefer to take a rest to go out during the weekends, but I can't ignore the gorgeous scenery, pretty flowers and light greenish new leaves.
I just finished reading the first book of Sherlock Homes series. After I was amused to watch BBC drama Sherlock, I was eager to read the book. I usually like written version more , but this time I enjoyed the drama more. The characters are more attractive, and the storyline is more thrilling. I have been fond of English accent, and I was able to watch how the English live.
I started another book of my favorite writer, John Grisham. The title is The Testament and it is about the distribution of property left by a rich man. Though I am reading at the beginning chapter it is exciting. After I am done I am going to tell the story. The Firm was the best to me among his books I have read until now.
I try to be careful for my diet not to eat food bad for my gastritis, but I think I would fail for today. I am supposed to have a meeting with my best friend who likes western food. We usually order different dishes, but as soon as my eyes are on those food I can't help gulping it. Wish me luck!
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Hello [이름]! I am very happy to hear from you again tonight by your composition. Also, I am very happy to know that you enjoyed your weekend with your sister. Wow! I am jealous! How I wish we have cherry blossoms tree in our country too. I think it would be very pleasant and attractive for me. Oh yes! You have to be very careful of the foods you are eating. Anyway my dear, you have to always take care of yourself because I am suffering from gastritis nowadays since I started eating foods that are not agreeable to my stomach. I will tell you more about it tomorrow my dear. So, take a rest for now. Talk to you tomorrow! Have a sweet nigt! I miss you! Hugs and kisses!
-Teacher Chloe
Hi! Chloe
>>Hi Chloe! It\'s been a week since we had a class last week.
>>It has been a week since the last time I heard from you.
>>It has been a week since we had our last class.
I\'ve been enjoying beautiful spring weather and cherry blossoms nowadays it had rained a couple of days ,though.
>>I have been enjoying the beautiful spring weather the cherry blossoms though it rained a couple of days ago.
I visited a zoo in my city to view the spring flowers with my sister last week.
>>Last week, I and my sister visited a zoo in my city to see the beautiful spring flowers.
My mother pouted after she found out my excursion with my sister, so I plan to go to see camellia flowers and barley field in the countryside this week.
>>My mother felt jealous when she found our that I had an excursion with my sister so I am planning to go to the countryside to see the beautiful camellia flowers and barley fields this week.
I prefer to take a rest to go out during the weekends, but I can\'t ignore the gorgeous scenery, pretty flowers and light greenish new leaves.
>>I prefer to take a rest that to go out on the weekends but I cannot ignore the wonders of nature. Beautiful sceneries like pretty flowers and light green new leaves.I just finished reading the first book of Sherlock Homes series.
>>Correct
After I was amused to watch BBC drama Sherlock, I was eager to read the book.
>> After I get amused to watch BBC drama Sherlock, I was eager then to read the book.
I usually like written version more , but this time I enjoyed the drama more.
>>I used to like the written version before but I am enjoying its movie now.
The characters are more attractive, and the storyline is more thrilling.
>>Correct
I have been fond of English accent, and I was able to watch how the English live.
>>I have been fond of listening to American accent and and I had chance to listen and even watch live American accent.I started another book of my favorite writer, John Grisham.
>>Correct
The title is The Testament and it is about the distribution of property left by a rich man.
>> The title is 'The Testament' and it is about the distribution of property left by a rich man. (We have to use the 'quote-and-quote in giving titles of movies, novels or any other articles.)
Though I am reading at the beginning chapter it is exciting.
>>The first chapter is exciting.
>>It is exciting in the beginning of the first chapter.
After I am done I am going to tell the story.
>>I will tell you the story after reading it.
>>I wil let you know the story once I am done reading it.
The Firm was the best to me among his books I have read until now.
>>John Grisham's 'The Firm' is still the best book I have read. I try to be careful for my diet not to eat food bad for my gastritis, but I think I would fail for today.
>>I am trying to be careful for my diet. I am trying to avoid some foods for my gastritis but I think I failed today.
I am supposed to have a meeting with my best friend who likes western food.
>> I am supposed to have a meeting with my best friend who likes Western food. (We have to capitalize the first letter of the word 'Western' because it is a standard English rule to capitalize the first letter of any nationalities.)
>>I am supposed to meet my best friend who like Western food.
We usually order different dishes, but as soon as my eyes are on those food I can\'t help gulping it.
>>We usually order different dishes but as soon as my eyes are set on the food, I can't help not to eat them.
Wish me luck!
>>Correct
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