hi chloe
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there! ^^
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here though you said that it was hard for you to make it.
Your effort in doing so is highly appreciated.
If you have time, don\'t forget to practice the corrections I have written below.
I\'ll see you in class! ^^]
T. Chloe^^
HI~
>> Hi!
How was your weekend?
>> CORRECT
I had a dinner with family of Yang-Pyeong.
>> I had dinner with my family in Yang-Pyeong.
Do you live in Seoul?
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Are you living in Seoul?
I want to serve dinner to you.
>> I want to have dinner with you.
I always thanks to you, my teacher.^^
>> I always want to thank you my teacher.
This homework is very hard. ^^
>> CORRECT
Anyway, you will see my homework below
>> CORRECT
Twentieth century to me is remembered IMF for 1998 years.
>> I can remember the twentieth century through the IMF in the year 1998.
Korea Economics was very hard.
Also, Our family was economically very hard.
>> It was also economically hard for our family.
At that time I was in high school.
>> CORRECT
Actually, I had to give up universit because money
>> Actually, I have to give up studying in the university because of some money problems.
But fortunately, My parents were overcome economic diffculties.
>> Fortunately, my parents overcame these economic difficulties.
I always thanks to my parents current that enabled me.
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