Hi~ chloe
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello! Happy Thursday!^^
Thank you so much for sending this in!
Your effort is highly appreciated.
You must be so happy right now.^^
Congratulations!
Keep on writing, okay?^^
See you later!^^
How was your last week?
>>Correct [talking about the week] OR >> How were you last week?
I wanted to see you.
but, I should delayed a my class because a change of occupation
>>I wanted to see you but I should delay my class because I have a new occupation.
My office is climate change institute.
>>My office is a climate change institute.
Fortunatelly, There are near the my home.
>>Fortunately, it is near my home.
It is about thirty minute.
>>It is a thirty-minute-drive.
My biggest regret was to choice my first occupation.
Because, Older office was different my talent.
>>My biggest regret is choosing my first occupation because my previous office is different from my field of expertise.
Nevertheless, I continue just worked.
>>Nevertheless, I just continued working there until now.
Current my think that I was a stupid.
>>Currently, I think I was stupid then.
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