Hi~ chloe

2013-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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How was your last week? I wanted to see you. but, I should delayed a my class because a change of occupation My office is climate change institute. Fortunatelly, There are near the my home. It is about thirty minute. My biggest regret was to choice my first occupation. Because, Older office was different my talent. Nevertheless, I continue just worked. Current my think that I was a stupid.

강사 첨삭

Hello! Happy Thursday!^^
Thank you so much for sending this in!
Your effort is highly appreciated.
You must be so happy right now.^^

Congratulations!

Keep on writing, okay?^^
See you later!^^

How was your last week?
>>Correct [talking about the week] OR >> How were you last week?
I wanted to see you.
but, I should delayed a my class because a change of occupation
>>I wanted to see you but I should delay my class because I have a new occupation.
My office is climate change institute.
>>My office is a climate change institute.
Fortunatelly, There are near the my home.

>>Fortunately, it is near my home.

It is about thirty minute.
>>It is a thirty-minute-drive.
My biggest regret was to choice my first occupation.

Because, Older office was different my talent.

>>My biggest regret is choosing my first occupation because my previous office is different from my field of expertise.
Nevertheless, I continue just worked.

>>Nevertheless, I just continued working there until now.
Current my think that I was a stupid.

>>Currently, I think I was stupid then.

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