hi connie - H.W p.40
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi connie.
Last Friday, I got the yuor correction and also comments for me.
I knew that You waited my homework. So I had to send it within friday.
But I coudn't do it. Because of my the other jobs.
This is the my reason.
I watched a fashion cable T.V very often.
I have been watch the fashion competition through T.V program.
And I have to go out side. I have a promise with one of a pastor.
I requested to your manager for change my class to tommorrow same time. and I got her agree.
강사 첨삭
Hi Pastor,
Oh, I’m glad that you dropped by for this message.
I understand you are busy. It’s okay, we can discuss our lessons in class.
You take care then and I’ll see you tomorrow.
Stay safe,
Connie
Hi connie.Last Friday, I got the yuor correction and also comments for me.
>> I saw your corrections and comments last Friday. I knew that You waited my homework. So I had to send it within friday.
>> I knew that you waited for my homework so I have to send it within Friday. But I coudn't do it. Because of my the other jobs.
>> but I couldn’t do it because of my other jobs. This is the my reason.
>> These are my reasons. I watched a fashion cable T.V very often.
>> I watch fashion programs on TV very often. I have been watch the fashion competition through T.V program.
>> I watch fashion competitions though the TV program. And I have to go out side. I have a promise with one of a pastor.
>> I have a promise to a pastor that we are going outside. I requested to your manager for change my class to tommorrow same time. and I got her agree.
>> I requested your manager for a change of schedule tomorrow at the same time, and she agreed.
>> Your manager approved my request of changing our schedule for today’s class, it will be tomorrow instead.
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