hi connie - H.W p.40

2010-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hi connie. Last Friday, I got the yuor correction and also comments for me. I knew that You waited my homework. So I had to send it within friday. But I coudn't do it. Because of my the other jobs. This is the my reason. I watched a fashion cable T.V very often. I have been watch the fashion competition through T.V program. And I have to go out side. I have a promise with one of a pastor. I requested to your manager for change my class to tommorrow same time. and I got her agree.

강사 첨삭

Hi Pastor, Oh, I’m glad that you dropped by for this message. I understand you are busy. It’s okay, we can discuss our lessons in class. You take care then and I’ll see you tomorrow. Stay safe, Connie   Hi connie.Last Friday, I got the yuor correction and also comments for me. >> I saw your corrections and comments last Friday. I knew that You waited my homework. So I had to send it within friday. >> I knew that you waited for my homework so I have to send it within Friday. But I coudn't do it. Because of my the other jobs. >> but I couldn’t do it because of my other jobs. This is the my reason. >> These are my reasons. I watched a fashion cable T.V very often. >> I watch fashion programs on TV very often. I have been watch the fashion competition through T.V program. >> I watch fashion competitions though the TV program. And I have to go out side. I have a promise with one of a pastor. >> I have a promise to a pastor that we are going outside. I requested to your manager for change my class to tommorrow same time. and I got her agree. >> I requested your manager for a change of schedule tomorrow at the same time, and she agreed. >> Your manager approved my request of changing our schedule for today’s class, it will be tomorrow instead.

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