Hi connie~

Hi connie! How's your weekend? I just rest at home. Today is [이름]day night. every [이름]day night, i want that today is friday night! but now [이름]day night! I watched tv , it's title is new announcer recurite. This progrm is made me excited and interesting. Many person of talent have a dream for beomeing announcer. This program comprised of competition each other. Having a dream is very happy things.

Hi there,

Happy Monday! I just read your composition and it's good to hear that you were able to rest during the weekend. I corrected some of your grammar errors. Kindly go over them. Have a nice day!

Hi connie!

>>Correct
How's your weekend?

>> Correct

I just rest at home.

>> I just rested at home.
Today is [이름]day night.

>> It’s [이름]day night again.
every [이름]day night, i want that today is friday night!

>> I always wish that [이름]day night would be Friday night.

but now [이름]day night!

>> But now, it’s [이름]day again.
I watched tv , it's title is new announcer recurite.

>> I watched New Announcer Recruit on tv.
This progrm is made me excited and interesting.

>> This program is exciting and interesting.
Many person of talent have a dream for beomeing announcer.

>> Many people want to become an announcer.
This program comprised of competition each other.

>> This program competes with other TV shows.
Having a dream is very happy things.

>> My dream gives me a happy feeling.