Hi! could you check my english?

2014-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi! could you check my english? i made a vedio and need to subtitle for english. 1.-------------------------------------------------- Our preconceptions about fragrance. Lavender from France. Freesia fragrance in the UK. Australian eucalyptus incense. Japanese cherry flavor. So what does the scent of the Republic of Korea ? Spring - korean rosebay Summer - buckwheat flower Fall - Forsythia ovata Winter - camellia flower Project notifying country flavor. Signature starts. ---------------------------------------------------- *signature is company name. *i worry about second sentences. please check my vedio on youtube chennel for understanding. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOimNNxcm1o

강사 첨삭

Thanks for entrusting this to me!

I watched the video and though I did not understand the Korean scripts, I think I get your point due to this message of yours.

I hope I got a clear view of what you want to show to your viewers.

Best of luck!!!

P.S.

I like the background music. ^.=

Hi! could you check my english?

>>Correct [capitalization: English]
i made a vedio and need to subtitle for english.
>>I made a video and I need English subtitles.
1.--------------------------------------------------
Our preconceptions about fragrance.
>Correct!
Lavender from France.

>>Correct
Freesia fragrance in the UK.

>>Correct
Australian eucalyptus incense.

>>Correct
Japanese cherry flavor.
>>Correct
So what does the scent of the Republic of Korea ?
>>So, what is the scent of the Republic of Korea?
Spring - korean rosebay
>>SPRING - Korean Rosebay

Summer - buckwheat flower
>>SUMMER - Buckwheat Flower

Fall - Forsythia ovata
>>FALL - Forsythia Ovata

Winter - camellia flower
>>WINTER - Camellia Flower
Project notifying country flavor.

>>This is a project notifying you of our county\'s flavor/s.

OR >> This is a project showcasing our country\'s flavor/s.
Signature starts.

>>Correct
----------------------------------------------------
*signature is company name.

>>Signature is the company name.
*i worry about second sentences.

>>I worry about the second sentence.
please check my vedio on youtube chennel for understanding.

>>Please check my video on YouTube channel for better understanding.^^
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOimNNxcm1o

>>Correct ^.^

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