Hi! could you check my english?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thanks for entrusting this to me!
I watched the video and though I did not understand the Korean scripts, I think I get your point due to this message of yours.
I hope I got a clear view of what you want to show to your viewers.
Best of luck!!!
P.S.
I like the background music. ^.=
Hi! could you check my english?
>>Correct [capitalization: English]
i made a vedio and need to subtitle for english.
>>I made a video and I need English subtitles.
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Our preconceptions about fragrance.
>Correct!
Lavender from France.
>>Correct
Freesia fragrance in the UK.
>>Correct
Australian eucalyptus incense.
>>Correct
Japanese cherry flavor.
>>Correct
So what does the scent of the Republic of Korea ?
>>So, what is the scent of the Republic of Korea?
Spring - korean rosebay
>>SPRING - Korean Rosebay
Summer - buckwheat flower
>>SUMMER - Buckwheat Flower
Fall - Forsythia ovata
>>FALL - Forsythia Ovata
Winter - camellia flower
>>WINTER - Camellia Flower
Project notifying country flavor.
>>This is a project notifying you of our county\'s flavor/s.
OR >> This is a project showcasing our country\'s flavor/s.
Signature starts.
>>Correct
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*signature is company name.
>>Signature is the company name.
*i worry about second sentences.
>>I worry about the second sentence.
please check my vedio on youtube chennel for understanding.
>>Please check my video on YouTube channel for better understanding.^^
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOimNNxcm1o
>>Correct ^.^
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