hi Csm.
학생이 쓴 원문
hi cam It's [이름].
yesterday, I had apointment to meet my co-teacher.
his name is David. He has some wounds about the memories of Korea.
so he will go back to Florida, 2th March.
I was so sorry about that experiences.
he is half Korean. her mother is korean, so he wants to certifify himself in Korea. but Korean who teach with him with the other school may hurts him.
he is very senstive but a little introverse.
so I want to be good memories of him and I want to healing his mind a little.
actually, he have written many english poem and he has tragic experience in his childhood,
when I think of Philippines, I feel some positive energy and bright, because you always encourage me and help to control me, so I want to be like you to David.
furthermore I found cnn announcer her name is [이름]. she is very bright (like me.....hahaha) and I really expect today lesson, and see u later.
have a good day~
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear [이름]! Thank you for this wonderful composition great job.
I\'m so happy to hear that I made you feel confident and positive..thank you for that my dear...
And it\'s also good that you are a true friend to others,I also commend you for that..
However please take note of the punctuation marks and some grammatical errors.
See you later my dear [이름]..
Teacher Cam^^
hi cam It\'s [이름].
>> Hi Cam, it\'s me [이름]!yesterday, I had apointment to meet my co-teacher.
>> Yesterday, I had an appointment with my co-teacher. (Don\'t forget your article - an)his name is David.
>> His name is David.
He has some wounds about the memories of Korea.
>> He has some bad memories in Korea.so he will go back to Florida, 2th March.
>> He will go back in Florida on March 2.I was so sorry about that experiences.
>> I was devastated about his expiriences,he is half Korean. her mother is korean,
>> David\'s mother is a Korean, so he is half blooded Korean. so he wants to certifify himself in Korea, but Korean who teach with him with the other school may hurts him.
>>He wants to live here but the Korean who taught him in the other school might hurt him.
he is very senstive but a little introverse.
>> He is sensitive but a little introvert.so I want to be good memories of him and I want to healing his mind a little.
>> I want to be a part of the good memories he had in Korea.actually, he have written many english poem and he has tragic experience in his childhood,
>>He encountered something tragic in his childhood days so he wrote many English poem.
when I think of Philippines, I feel some positive energy and bright,
>>When I think of the Philippines, I feel some positive energy and
because you always encourage me and help to control me, so I want to be like you to David.
>> because you always encourage and help me control myself. So I want to be like you to David.furthermore I found cnn announcer her name is [이름].
>>Furthermore I found a CNN announcer whose name is [이름].
she is very bright (like me.....hahaha) and I really expect today lesson, and see u later.
>> she is very bright. ( like me) I am really excited for today\'s lesson. See you later.have a good day~
>> Have a good day.
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