Hi ;D
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! This is a very interesting book. And you know what, you need to follow what the writer stated. You need to become the person you wanted for yourself and do not let other people decide for you okay. Stay happy! Take care!
Lei J
Lei!
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When you were young, you learned a lot of something.
>>When you were young, you learned a lot of things.
That's why you are a smart. kkk
>>That's why you are smart. KKK
Today, I'm gonna talk to my favorite book.
>>Today I'm going to talk about my favorite book.
The subject is Good luck to you.
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>>The title of this book is Good luck to You.
It is composed Q&A about problem that we experience in our daily life.
>>It is composed of different Q & A about our experiences in our daily lives.
The writer's counseling is very clear.
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Sometimes Koreans have a problem, as we are obsessed that how others think of me.
>>Sometimes Koreans have a problem, as we are obsessed on what or how others think of me..
>>Sometimes Koreans have a problem about how others judge me.
These things even lead to social problem.
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For example, many koreans live the life what others wanted for them not the life they truly wanted.
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The writer said, you have to become just somebody not somebody's something.
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It is hard to express in English. kkk
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Anyway books is good.
>>Anyway, this book is good.
Have a great day.
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Good luck to you dear. =)
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