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Question: Do you think people work too much nowadays? Answer(my opinion) : Yes, I do. Nowadays, people work too much than before. In the old days, people usually did farm work. People had busylife in the spring and the fall. But they took a long rest during the winter. because farm work finished on the fall. Nowadays, most of people have an office job. So, they have no break season and besides they have to work overtime occasionally.

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Question: Do you think people work too much nowadays?

>>Correct!
Answer(my opinion) :

>>Answer (in my opinion):
Yes, I do.

>>Correct!
Nowadays, people work too much than before.

>>Correct!
In the old days, people usually did farm work.

>>Correct!
People had busylife in the spring and the fall.

>>Correct!
But they took a long rest during the winter. because farm work finished on the fall.

>>They took a long rest though during the winter because farm work finished on the fall.
Nowadays, most of people have an office job.

>>Correct!

So, they have no break season and besides they have to work overtime occasionally.

>>That's why, they have no break season and besides they have to work overtime occasionally.