Hi :D

2011-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hi~ Cristel :) Happy monday's evening. I felt like we call after a long time. Anyways, how nice to hear yor voice. Thank you for listening my stories and your concern. Ah~ I didn't ask you for your weekend. How did your weekend? kk.. I think I should go to bed. Bye dear. Take care. See you tomorrow my teacher and my today's doctor :)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! My weekend was great! I went to my hometown and had a good time with my friends and family. It was my best friend’s birthday last Saturday and I helped him prepare for the party. It was a blast! Thank you for asking! I’m glad to be your doctor for today! J Goodnight and take a good rest! Muah! -Kristel Hi~ Cristel :) >> Hi Kristel! JHappy monday's evening. >> Happy Monday evening!I felt like we call after a long time. >> I felt like we haven’t spoken for a long time.Anyways, how nice to hear yor voice. >> Anyways, how nice was it to hear your voice.Thank you for listening my stories and your concern. >>CORRECT OR: Thank you for your concern and for listening to my stories.Ah~ I didn't ask you for your weekend. >> CORRECTHow did your weekend? >> How was your weekend? Or, How did your weekend go?kk.. I think I should go to bed.Bye dear. Take care.See you tomorrow my teacher and my today's doctor :) >>CORRECT or ..my doctor for the day.

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