Hi :D
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ Cristel :)
Happy monday's evening.
I felt like we call after a long time.
Anyways, how nice to hear yor voice.
Thank you for listening my stories and your concern.
Ah~ I didn't ask you for your weekend.
How did your weekend?
kk.. I think I should go to bed.
Bye dear. Take care.
See you tomorrow my teacher and my today's doctor :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
My weekend was great! I went to my hometown and had a good time with my friends and family. It was my best friend’s birthday last Saturday and I helped him prepare for the party. It was a blast! Thank you for asking! I’m glad to be your doctor for today! J Goodnight and take a good rest! Muah!
-Kristel
Hi~ Cristel :)
>> Hi Kristel! JHappy monday's evening.
>> Happy Monday evening!I felt like we call after a long time.
>> I felt like we haven’t spoken for a long time.Anyways, how nice to hear yor voice.
>> Anyways, how nice was it to hear your voice.Thank you for listening my stories and your concern.
>>CORRECT OR: Thank you for your concern and for listening to my stories.Ah~ I didn't ask you for your weekend.
>> CORRECTHow did your weekend?
>> How was your weekend? Or, How did your weekend go?kk.. I think I should go to bed.Bye dear. Take care.See you tomorrow my teacher and my today's doctor :)
>>CORRECT or ..my doctor for the day.
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