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Hi there, [이름]! ^.^

Happy Friday! ^^

Thank you for making your homework! ^^

You did well! ^^,

You explained your thought clearly through your writing.

I was fascinated while reading your composition.

I also want to go to Canada.

I heard people there are very accommodating.

By the way. don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions for your writing improvement below.

Anyway, why did you put our class on hold today?

Hahaha! ^^

I think you have a date, right?

That\'s all for now! ^^

Enjoy a fantastic weekend! ^^,

See you on Monday! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Someday, I really want to go to Canada with my familly.

>> Someday, I really want to go to Canada with my family. (Be careful with your spelling.)

I heard that Canada is so safe that they don\'t even lock their front door.

>> I heard that Canada is so safe that they don\'t even lock their front doors. (Since you used THEIR, DOOR should be DOORS.)

>> OR: I heard that Canada is a very safe place that they don\'t even lock their front doors.

Also, Canadian people don\'t have any racial discrimination.

>> CORRECT!

>> BETTER: Also, Canadians don\'t have any racial discrimination.

Most of all, the view of winter must be amazing!

>> CORRECT!

My parents don\'t like winter, but I like winter season.

>> CORRECT!

>> BETTER: My parents don\'t like winter, but I like it.

If I\'m in Canada, I would enjoy winter\'s mood fully~

>> If I was in Canada, I would enjoy winter\'s mood fully. (\"If I was ..., I would ...\" and \"If I am ..., I will ...\")

>> OR: If I am in Canada, I would enjoy winter\'s mood fully.

However, for my parents who prefer summer, l will take parents to Southeast Asia as soon as possible!

>> However, for my parents who prefer summer, I will take them to Southeast Asia as soon as possible! (Avoid redundancy.)