Hi :D

Long time no see :) I didn't greeting well but, I was feeling good to meet you again. Here is my school description. There are a lot of buildings in my campus. It may be about 40 buildings. When I pass through the main gate, I can see lifelong-education hall. On that hall's right side, there are a head office and MBA school. On the lefe side, I can see social science college and business management I'm attending. There are 3 buildings in my college. The center of university is 2 libraries, student hall and water fountain. I can find a cafeteria, a bookstore, a bank and photo studio in student hall. And water fountain is very beautiful view during all seasons. Ms.Venus~ Have a great day. I will wating for our class. Take care and enough sleep.

Dear [이름],

I'm also glad to talk to you again. It was nice. Thanks for describing your school for me. Your university sounds very nice too.

Take care.

See you.

-teacher Venus-

 

Long time no see :)

>>CORRECT J
I didn't greeting well but, I was feeling good to meet you again.

>>I didn't greet you well but I felt good to talk to you again.
Here is my school description.

>>CORRECT J
There are a lot of buildings in my campus.

>>CORRECT J
It may be about 40 buildings.

>>They may be about 40 buildings.
When I pass through the main gate, I can see lifelong-education hall.

>>When I pass through the main gate, I can see the life-long education hall.
On that hall's right side, there are a head office and MBA school.

>>On that hall's right side, there are the head office and the MBA school.
On the lefe side, I can see social science college and business management I'm attending.

>>On the left side, I can see the Social Science College and the Business Management College which I'm attending.
There are 3 buildings in my college.

>>CORRECT J
The center of university is 2 libraries, student hall and water fountain.

>>The center of the university is the 2 libraries, student hall, and water fountain.
I can find a cafeteria, a bookstore, a bank and photo studio in student hall.

>>I can find a cafeteria, a bookstore, a bank, and a photo studio in the student hall.

>>There is a cafeteria, a bookstore, a bank, and a photo studio in the student hall.
And water fountain is very beautiful view during all seasons.
>>And the water fountain is a very beautiful view on all seasons.
Ms.Venus~ Have a great day.

>>Ms. [Name], have a great day.
I will wating for our class.

>>I will be waiting for our class.
Take care and enough sleep.

>>Take care and get enough sleep.