Hi :D

Happy monday teacher. Did you enjoy your lunch? I was pleased with listening your story. Anyway, I'm going to write my major. My major is Business Management. So, I'm studying general business like Marketing, Finance, Accounting, Human Resource. Among these subjects, I'm interested in Human Resource Management. I think humans are important competitive factor in terms of business. That's why I like to learn Human Resource. Actually, I chose my major for inauguration of an enterprise. But now I would like to enter the large enterprise. I want to learn a lot of Business knowledge and contribute to that enterprise through my abilities. I never regret to choose Business Management by my major. Thank you for reading my composition. Have a lovely day. dear. :)

Hi there Miss [이름]!!

 

   I am glad to hear your story too. I hope you뭨e going to enjoy your week this week.

 

Here are the corrections of your composition:

 

Happy monday teacher.

>> Happy Monday too!
Did you enjoy your lunch?

>> correct
I was pleased with listening your story.

>> I was pleases listening to your story.
Anyway, I'm going to write my major.

>> Anyway, I뭢 going to write about my major.
My major is Business Management.

>> correct
So, I'm studying general business like Marketing, Finance, Accounting, Human Resource.

>> correct
Among these subjects, I'm interested in Human Resource Management.

>> correct
I think humans are important competitive factor in terms of business.

>> Correct
That뭩 why I like to learn Human Resource.

>> correct
Actually, I chose my major for inauguration of an enterprise.

>> Actually, I chose my major for future enterprise.
But now I would like to enter the large enterprise.

>> But I would like to venture on bigger enterprises.
I want to learn a lot of Business knowledge and contribute to that enterprise through my abilities.

>> I want to learn a lot about business and contribute more to my entrepreneurial skills.
I never regret to choose Business Management by my major.

>> I never regret choosing Business Management as my major.

Thank you for reading my composition.
Have a lovely day Dear. :)

>> Thank you too!!