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2011-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi there :) Finally, I finished midterm exam~ But I was busy due to upload my assignment :( It is already 2:15am. I'm going to attend Educational-Industrial Forum early in the this morning. So if I attend that forum, I won't be answer your call. Actually I didn't feel good yesterday. It may be because I feel the psychological burdens for my future. So I've got sick often these days. Anyway I will try to control my mind. I believe I will be better soon :) I may be not easy to sleep. ...or not kkk Actually I have many worries but I'm very sleepy.kk See you then teacher~ from. Beautiful girl..(Sorry, I'm crazy because of pressure for getting a job. T.T) kkk Bye!

강사 첨삭

Hello beautiful girl. Happy Wednesday. Thank you for always sharing your insights with me. I really appreciate it. I hope that things would be better for you soon. Take care always! _T. Kelly Finally, I finished midterm exam~ >> Finally, I finished my midterm exam.But I was busy due to upload my assignment :( >> But I am busy uploading my assignment.It is already 2:15am. >> Correct.I'm going to attend Educational-Industrial Forum early in the this morning. >> I'm going to attend the Educational Industrial Forum tomorrow  morning.So if I attend that forum, I won't be answer your call. >> So if I will attend that forum, I won’t be answering your call. >> I cannot answer your call if I will attend the forum.Actually I didn't feel good yesterday. >> Correct.It may be because I feel the psychological burdens for my future. >> Maybe because of the  psychological burdens that i’m experiencing for my future.So I've got sick often these days. >> So I always get sick these days.Anyway I will try to control my mind. >> Anyway, I will try not to think much. >> Anyway, I will try not to worry too much.I believe I will be better soon :) >> I believe I will feel better soon.I may be not easy to sleep. >> I have difficulty sleeping. ...or not kkk >> Correct.Actually I have many worries but I'm very sleepy.kk >> Correct.See you then teacher~ >> Correct.from. Beautiful girl..(Sorry, I'm crazy because of pressure for getting a job. T.T) kkk >> from Beautiful girl.. ( Sorry I’m crazy because I am pressured to get a job.)

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