Hi dear,

2012-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

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Hi. I'm Yu-mi. I did my homework in my paper yesterday. kk 1. I've been living on my own for three years now. 2. That beautiful bag is actually mine. 3. КК my god! What happen!? I've never seen you so nervous. 4. It is mine. My mother gave me as her present. 5. Go and buy your clothes while I'm paying mine. 1.I went there in 1987. 2.We arrived in this country in October. 3.We get up early in the morning. 4.Do you dream at night? 5.He's working on his homework at the moment. 6.I lived in the US in the 1990s. 7.We like going to the movies in the evening. 8.Let's meet at six o clock. 9.He was born in July. Your voice is cute. So I think you are younger than me. :-) Anyway, I met my boyfriend last night. We ate aut and drank beer. He could go home. So he took a taxi and went to the subway station. When he arrived the subwaystation, his cell phone was together with the taxi. It's difficult to find a losed cell phone in Korea. I'm so sad...:-(

강사 첨삭

Hello there sweety! ^^ Good afternoon! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a very good job, so keep it up. By the way, I hope that you could still find your boyfriend\'s cellphone. Let\'s keep our fingers crossed. -Teacher Rowena- Hi. I\'m Yu-mi. >> Correct.I did my homework in my paper yesterday. kk >>  I did my homework on my paper yesterday. 1. I\'ve been living on my own for three years now. >> Correct. 2. That beautiful bag is actually mine. >> Correct. 3. КК my god! What happen!? I\'ve never seen you so nervous. >> Correct. 4. It is mine. My mother gave me as her present. >> Correct. 5. Go and buy your clothes while I\'m paying mine. >> Correct. 1.I went there in 1987. >> Correct. 2.We arrived in this country in October. >> Correct. 3.We get up early in the morning. >> Correct. 4.Do you dream at night? >> Correct. 5.He\'s working on his homework at the moment. >> Correct. 6.I lived in the US in the 1990s. >> Correct. 7.We like going to the movies in the evening. >> Correct. 8.Let\'s meet at six o clock. >> Correct. 9.He was born in July. >> Correct.  Your voice is cute.So I think you are younger than me. :-) >> Correct. Anyway, I met my boyfriend last night. >> Correct. We ate aut and drank beer.  >> We ate out and drank beer. He could go home. So he took a taxi and went to the subway station. >> Correct. When he arrived the subwaystation, his cell phone was together with the taxi. >> When he arrived at the subway station, he found out that he left his phone in the taxi. It\'s difficult to find a losed cell phone in Korea. >> It\'s difficult to find a lost cell phone in Korea. I\'m so sad...:-( >> Correct.

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