HI ...dear!

2010-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

학생이 쓴 원문

Are you having a fasinating weekend? Of course ,right!Now!! Now I,m talking to myself alone in English to have a meaningful weekend! If some people look at me , they think I am not normal right now. But I dont care about it. As what you advised, I also thought of finding a foreign friend and joining English club. But ,I feel it's not easy! Recently, I'm so glad that my English speaking is gradually getting better with you.So I,m taking a step back and catch my breath(take time) to spend more time for English speaking! Through our lesson ,I realized that even though a setence is so easy, it can be my sentence when I practice it on a real situation [real life] Thank you , I will be waiting for you call and my future! See you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Sir Martin! I’m so glad to have read and checked your composition. You are doing great in your English practices. Whether in our lessons or self-study. Keep up the good work! Keep moving forward! Have a nice day ahead! It’s me, Joanna   HI...dear! >>>Hi, dear! Are you having a fasinating weekend?>>>okay >>>fascinating (correct spelling)Of course ,right!Now!! >>>I know you are right now! (better)Now, I,m talking to myself alone in English to have a meaningful weekend! >>>okay but delete ALONE because MYSELF and ALONE means one. >>>I’m NOT I,mIf some people look at me , they think I am not normal right now.But I dont care about it. >>>okay but don’t place space in between ME and ,. It should be (me, they think…)As what you advised, I also thought of finding a foreign friend and joining an English club. >>>okay But ,I feel it's not easy! >>>But I think it’s not that easy! Recently, I'm so glad that my English speaking is gradually getting better with your help. >>>okay So I’m taking a step back and catch my breath, taking time, to spend more time for English speaking practice! >>>OkayThrough our lessons, I realized that even though a sentence is so easy, it can be my sentence when I practice it in a real situation.Thank you , I will be waiting for you call and my future! >>>Thank you, I will be waiting for your call.See you! >>>correct

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