HI ...dear!

2010-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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Hi! Joanna! Are you having a relaxing weekend? I heard from Tina that you were not fine last Friday! I was surprised and realized that the voice is not yours when I took a call. I hope you to regain your strength of body! I will be waiting for your call on Monday. If you ask me , How are you doing? I'm fine . My Enllish is getting better. After a lot of time I can be fleunt in English speaking! I am a cofidenct about that. Have a good time for the rest of the weekend! See you, then!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Sir Martin! Yeah, I feel better now. Thank you for your concern. I appreciate. Thank you for helping yourself with your English. I’ll call you later.   Hi! Joanna! Are you having a relaxing weekend? >>>correctI heard from Tina that you were not fine last Friday! >>>correctI was surprised and realized that the voice is not yours when I took [a] the call.I hope you to regain your strength of body! >>>I hope you can regain your strength.I will be waiting for your call on Monday. >>>correctIf you ask me , “How are you doing? “ >>>okay >>>If you ask me how am I doing?,I'm fine . My Enllish is getting better. >>>okay >>>English (check spelling)After a lot of time I can be fleunt in English speaking! >>>I believe that after a long time of practice, I can be fluent in speaking English!I am a cofidenct about that. >>>I am confident about that.Have a good time for the rest of the weekend! See you, then! >>>okay

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