HI ...dear!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Joanna! Are you having a relaxing weekend?
I heard from Tina that you were not fine last Friday!
I was surprised and realized that the voice is not yours when I took a call.
I hope you to regain your strength of body!
I will be waiting for your call on Monday.
If you ask me , How are you doing?
I'm fine . My Enllish is getting better.
After a lot of time I can be fleunt in English speaking!
I am a cofidenct about that.
Have a good time for the rest of the weekend! See you, then!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Sir Martin!
Yeah, I feel better now. Thank you for your concern. I appreciate.
Thank you for helping yourself with your English.
I’ll call you later.
Hi! Joanna! Are you having a relaxing weekend?
>>>correctI heard from Tina that you were not fine last Friday!
>>>correctI was surprised and realized that the voice is not yours when I took [a] the call.I hope you to regain your strength of body!
>>>I hope you can regain your strength.I will be waiting for your call on Monday.
>>>correctIf you ask me , “How are you doing? “
>>>okay
>>>If you ask me how am I doing?,I'm fine . My Enllish is getting better.
>>>okay
>>>English (check spelling)After a lot of time I can be fleunt in English speaking!
>>>I believe that after a long time of practice, I can be fluent in speaking English!I am a cofidenct about that.
>>>I am confident about that.Have a good time for the rest of the weekend! See you, then!
>>>okay
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