Hi Dianne!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Creative Writing: Are there any customs in your country visitors might find strange? What is it?
We make a deep bow being kneel down to our parents, elders
and sir who we respect for Lunar New Year's Day.
We sit on our knee(kneel down) foront of parents after bow
and then parents tell us about some advices and words of blessing.
In children case, they get some money from their parents or elders after bow
and listenning to advices and words of blessing.
we call this celemony 'saebae' that means 'new bow'
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Hi Dianne!
I couldn't understand this part in your feedback.
'because you are taking risks.'
This sentence below is in your feedback.
Your interactive and the way you threw questions back is a sign that your skill is improving because you are taking risks.
I am waiting for your class!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about\"Sebae\" or your New Year\'s Bow.
I always see Koreans in Korean dramas bowing their heads. I know that this is a sign of respect but I didn\'t know there\'s more to it.
Anyway, the word advice is an uncountable (mass) noun in English (like water or sand) and therefore, it has no plural form.
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne
Creative Writing: Are there any customs in your country visitors might find strange? What is it?>> Correct We make a deep bow being kneel down to our parents, elders and sir who we respect for Lunar New Year\'s Day.
>> We bow or kneel down to our parents, elders, and professionals who we respect on Lunar New Year\'s Day.
We sit on our knee(kneel down) foront of parents after bow and then parents tell us about some advices and words of blessing.>> We kneel down in front of our parents after bowing and then our parents tell us about some advice and words of blessing.In children case, they get some money from their parents or elders after bow and listenning to advices and words of blessing.>>In the case of children, they get some money from their parents or elders after bowing and listening to their advice and words of blessing.we call this celemony \'saebae\' that means \'new bow\'
>> We call this ceremony \'saebae\' that means \'New Year\'s Bow\'.====================================================================================Hi Dianne!>> CorrectI couldn\'t understand this part in your feedback.
>> Correct\'because you are taking risks.\'
>> CorrectThis sentence below is in your feedback.>> CorrectYour interactive and the way you threw questions back is a sign that your skill is improving because you are taking risks.>> Correct (It means you are taking risks in asking questions back because some atudents are reluctant to ask ^^)I am waiting for your class!
>> Correct
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