Hi Dianne!!

2016-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hi, dianne! I will translate something for you instead of homework. Have you read the introduction that was written about you in Korean by POWER ENGLISH. I think that you could have not read because it was written in Korean. This introduction is for that the students choose their teacher. Reading my translation below would be good for you. We introduce the ACE TEACHER DIANNE. She has a special working career in Lebanon as a professional nurse who is graduated from prestigious college. Her ESL teaching career is more than 4 years and She is a popular teacher whom every students from beginner to advanced level like. Her teaching style is very enegytic and considerate of students. Meet her free talking class that is interesting as funny conversation subjects those are from her various experience ===================================================================================== Do you agree with this introduction? I totally agree with it.

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Hi, [이름]!   Seriously? You have translated the Korean text well. It\'s understandable. I am grateful that you translated it for me. Well, I don\'t really know what to say, if I\'m going to agree or not. Only my students know me or my characteristics as a teacher. kkk Thank you very much! I appreciate it a lot! Great effort!   _Teacher Dianne   Hi, dianne!>> Hi, Dianne! I will translate something for you instead of homework. >> Correct >> or: I will translate something for you instead of doing my homework.Have you read the introduction that was written about you in Korean by POWER ENGLISH. >> Have you read the introduction that was written about you in Korean by POWER ENGLISH? (the sentence is grammatically correct, but be careful with punctuation)I think that you could have not read because it was written in Korean. >> I think that you have not read because it was written in Korean.This introduction is for that the students choose their teacher.>> This introduction is for the students to help choose their teacher. Reading my translation below would be good for you. >> CorrectWe introduce the ACE TEACHER DIANNE. >> CorrectShe has a special working career in Lebanon as a professional nurse who is graduated from prestigious college. >> She has a special working career in Lebanon as a professional nurse who graduated from a prestigious college school. Her ESL teaching career is more than 4 years and She is a popular teacher whom every students from beginner to advanced level like.>> Her ESL teaching career is more than 4 years and she is a popular teacher whom every student from beginner to advanced level like. Her teaching style is very enegytic and considerate of students. >> Her teaching style is very energetic and she is considerate to students. Meet her free talking class that is interesting as funny conversation subjects those are from her various experience. >> Try or meet her free talking class which is interesting as funny conversation subjects that are from her various experiences.=====================================================================================Do you agree with this introduction? >> Correct I totally agree with it. >> Correct

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