Hi, Dianne!!

Who is the person you admire and how did that person influence you to become a successful person? I am surprised afer reading this question because I don't have a person who I admire. Even though I thought long time, I could recall who is. I had people who I admire, When I was a young man. I don't know the reason why I don't have it now. ======== Hi, Dianne!! I worry about your misunderstanding when I tell a joke. Please do not get me wrong. I am just kidding. kkk I think that you are so pure and innocent but I am so unpure. ========= I wanted to tell these sentences in the last class. (When I said to my daughter "You have to reduce your weight." She reflect me "You have to reduce it too and I take after you." ) (There are too many red correction in my composition. I am frustrated when I read this. I want to write perfect sentences. When can I make perpect senteces. Can I do it? But don't worry Dianne! I will try my best for me and to keep the promise with my children.

Hi, [이름]!   I was really laughing while I was reading your composition. You have a good sense of humor. Well, I guess, that\'s what your daughter took from you as well, aside from being fat or chubby. kkk Don\'t worry, I\'m not going to take your jokes seriously. kkk I think, I\'ll get used to it. ^^   _Teacher Dianne   Who is the person you admire and how did that person influence you to become a successful person? >> Correct I am surprised afer reading this question because I don\'t have a person who I admire. >> I am surprised after reading this question because I don\'t have a person or any person who I admire. (be careful with the spelling of the word \"after\" ^^)Even though I thought long time, I could recall who is. >> I couldn\'t recall who the person is even though I thought about it for a long time.I had people who I admire, When I was a young man. >> I had people who I admire when I was a young man. >> Or: When I was a young man, I had people who I admire.I don\'t know the reason why I don\'t have it now. >> Correct========Hi, Dianne!! >> CorrectI worry about your misunderstanding when I tell a joke. >> Correct (Don\'t worry I\'m going to get used to it. kkk)Please do not get me wrong. I am just kidding. kkk >> Correct (Yes, I know)I think that you are so pure and innocent but I am so unpure. >> Correct (Thank you for using the word pure in your sentence. My heart is pure and I\'m really innocent. kkk^.^) =========I wanted to tell these sentences in the last class. >> Correct(When I said to my daughter \"You have to reduce your weight.\"She reflect me \"You have to reduce it too and I take after you.\" )>> When I said to my daughter, \"You have to reduce your weight\", she replied, \"You have to reduce it too because I take after you.\" >> Or: When I told my daughter that she has to reduce her weight, she answered that I have to reduce my weight as well because she took it from me.(There are too many red correction in my composition. >> There are too many red marks in my composition.I am frustrated when I read this. I want to write perfect sentences. >> CorrectWhen can I make perpect senteces. >> When can I make perfect sentences? (be careful with spelling) Can I do it? >> Correct (Of course, you can!)But don\'t worry Dianne! >> Correct I will try my best for me and to keep the promise with my children. >> I will try my best for me and to keep the promise to my children.