Hi, Dianne!!
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What are some problems with corruption in the political system of your country? Do you think corruption will always be a part of business and politics?
This is a very heavy topic to talk it.
There are many corrupted politicians and businessnan in Korea.
They are connected each other very firmly for a very long time.
They give and take helpful informations for business and black money.
The politicians make some policies for some business man, not people.
And the businessman offer them political funds.
This chain is very strong and continued to their descendent.
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Hi Dianne!
This word 'Explicit' was a word which I want to give you.
But I gave you the word 'Conplicit' which is not existed.
I am disappointe in my memory.ㅠㅠ
If you would be old, you could understand me.ㅠㅠ
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Do you know this mark 'ㅠㅠ'
The meaning of this mark is 'crying face'
'ㅠㅠ' is Korean character.
Have a good weekend!
PS: Today's class was so happy! Thank you Dianne!!kkk
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Hi, [이름]!
I had fun in class. ^^
Thank you for sharing your opinion about the essay question.
I guess, it\'s hard to eliminate corruption.
This has passed from generation to generation.
See you on Monday! ^^
_Teacher Dianne
What are some problems with corruption in the political system of your country? Do you think corruption will always be a part of business and politics?>> Correct
This is a very heavy topic to talk it.
>> This is a very heavy topic to talk about.There are many corrupted politicians and businessnan in Korea.
>> There are many corrupt politicians and businessmen in Korea.They are connected each other very firmly for a very long time.
>> They are connected to each other very firmly for a very long time.They give and take helpful informations for business and black money.
>> They give and take helpful information for business and black money. (the word information is a non-count noun so \"information\" is both singular and plural)
The politicians make some policies for some business man, not people.
>> The politicians make some policies for some businessman and not for the people.And the businessman offer them political funds.
>> CorrectThis chain is very strong and continued to their descendent.
>> This chain is very strong and continued to their descendants.===============================Hi Dianne!>> Correct
This word \'Explicit\' was a word which I want to give you.
>> This word \'Explicit\' was the word which I want to give or tell you.But I gave you the word \'Conplicit\' which is not existed.
>> But I gave you the word \'Conplicit\' which is not existing.
>> Or: But I gave you the word \'Conplicit\' which doesn\'t exist. (The word \"complicit\" does exist, but it has a different meaning)I am disappointe in my memory.ㅠㅠ
>> I am disappointed with my memory.If you would be old, you could understand me.ㅠㅠ
>> If you would be old, you would understand me.ㅠㅠ====================Do you know this mark \'ㅠㅠ\'
>> Do you know the meaning of this mark \'ㅠㅠ\'?The meaning of this mark is \'crying face\'.
>> Correct\'ㅠㅠ\' is Korean character.
>> It is a Korean character.Have a good weekend!>> CorrectPS: Today\'s class was so happy! Thank you Dianne!!kkk
>> Correct
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