Hi, Dianne!!

2016-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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What are some things about your eating habits you want to change? Do you think people from your country usually eat healthy food? I have a bad eating habit. I want to change it but it is too difficult for me to change. it is to have too much food even though I am not hungry when I am stressed . The result of the binge eating is to increase of weights and then I get stress again because of the increasing of weights and then I eat too much again! kkk To break this vicious cycle is very difficult for me. In Korea, there are very many over-weighted people who are increasing gradually. There is too much instant food around us and we can get it easily as well. Most young people in Korea like the instanat food but they don't like the healthy food such as vegetables or fruits. Korea would be a obesity country like USA If the present state continue.

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Hi, [이름]!   I think we have the same situation. kkk We are gluttons. Gluttony is one of the deadly sins. I\'m kinda sad because of this. I can\'t control my eating habit. ^^ We need to change it.   _Teacher Dianne ^.^   What are some things about your eating habits you want to change? Do you think people from your country usually eat healthy food?>> Correct I have a bad eating habit. >> CorrectI want to change it but it is too difficult for me to change. >> Correctit is to have too much food even though I am not hungry when I am stressed .>> Especially when I\'m stressed, I tend to eat too much food even though I am not hungry.The result of the binge eating is to increase of weights and then I get stress again because of the increasing of weights and then I eat too much again! kkk >> Increased weight is the result of binge eating and I get stressed again after knowing that I gained weight then I tend to eat too much again. ^____^To break this vicious cycle, is very difficult for me. >> Correct >> Or: It\'s very difficult for me to break this bad habit.In Korea, there are very many over-weighted people who are increasing gradually. >> In Korea, there are many overweight people who increase their weight gradually. >> Or: There is a gradual increasing number of overweight people in Korea.There is too much instant food around us and we can get it easily as well. >> CorrectMost young people in Korea like the instanat food but they don\'t like the healthy food such as vegetables or fruits. >> Most young people in Korea like instant food and they don\'t like healthy food such as vegetables or fruits.Korea would be a obesity country like USA If the present state continue. >> If the present state continues, Korea will be like the USA wherein obesity is rampant or common.

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