hi Dianne!!

2017-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hello! happy friday because tomorrow is weekend^^ I'm sorry what did't prepare last class. Always I appreciate to you because I really don't speak english well. but you're always trying to help me. and... This is my homework that you gave me. Choise correct word at sentence. I surely started my homework. but.... I finish now ㅠ 1. She performed (magnificently). It was a (magnificent) beautiful performance. 2. Her voice sounds (beautifully). She sang the song (exactly) as it was written. We heard it (perfectly). 3. He was a very (sensible) person. He acted very (sensibly). 4. Mike wrote too (slowly) on the exam. He always writes (slowly). 5. Talk (softly) or don't talk at all. The music played (softly). thank

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I definitely understand your situation.

I know that you\'re tired when you reach home.

I\'m still happy that you have time to finish your homework.

Here is the correction. See you later my dear!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Hello! happy friday because tomorrow is weekend^^
>>
Hello!  Happy Friday because tomorrow is weekend! ^^


 I\'m sorry what did\'t prepare last class.
>> 
 I\'m sorry that I didn\'t prepare for the last class.


 Always I appreciate to you because I really don\'t speak english well. but you\'re always trying to help me.
>>  I always appreciate you because I really don\'t speak english well, but you always try to help me. 
 
and...
This is my homework that you gave me.

>> And this is my homework that you gave me.


Choise correct word at sentence.

>> Choose the correct word in the sentence.

 I surely started my homework. 

>> correct
 but.... I finish now ㅠ

>> But I just finished it now.

>> OR: I have started my homework, but I just finished it now.

1. She performed (magnificently). It was a (magnificent) beautiful performance.

>> She performed magnificently. It was a magnificently beautiful performance.
 2. Her voice sounds (beautifully). She sang the song (exactly) as it was written. We heard it (perfectly).

>> Her voice sounds beautiful. She sang the song exactly as it was written. We heard it perfectly.
 3. He was a very (sensible) person. He acted very (sensibly).

>> correct
 4. Mike wrote too (slowly) on the exam. He always writes (slowly).

>> correct
 5. Talk (softly) or don\'t talk at all. The music played (softly).
>> correct


thank

>> Thank you. ^^ 


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