Hi Dianne.
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Hi, Jane!
Wow! I\'m impressed with your opinion.
I do ag[이름] with you, because in this modern time, women can keep up with men.
I love your answer. ^^
Have a nice day!
_Teacher Dianne
Hi, It\'s already thursday!! haha
>> Hi, It\'s already Thursday! haha (Days pass by so fast. ^^)
This is my homework today.
>> correct
< What is your opinion about women in the military?
>> correct
I think women in the military are awesome.
>> correct
I know men are stronger than women but women are also have excellence in some part.
>> I know men are stronger than women, but women also have excellence in some part.
>> or: I know men are stronger than women, but women also excel in some part.
>> or: I know men are stronger than women, but women are more excellent in some part.
For exemple, make elaborate tactics, delicacy in all situations, etc...
>> correct
I think the military is no longer just a symbol of men.
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Combining men and women will have a great synergy effect.
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