Hi Dianne.

2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hi, It's already thursday!! haha This is my homework today. <What is your opinion about women in the military? > I think women in the military are awesome. I know men are stronger than women but women are also have excellence in some part.For exemple, make elaborate tactics, delicacy in all situations, etc.. I think the military is no longer just a symbol of men. Combining men and women will have a great synergy effect.

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Hi, Jane!


Wow! I\'m impressed with your opinion.

I do ag[이름] with you, because in this modern time, women can keep up with men.

I love your answer. ^^

Have a nice day!


_Teacher Dianne


Hi, It\'s already thursday!! haha

>> Hi, It\'s already Thursday! haha (Days pass by so fast. ^^)
 This is my homework today.

>> correct

< What is your opinion about women in the military?
>> correct
I think women in the military are awesome.

>> correct
 I know men are stronger than women but women are also have excellence in some part.

>>  I know men are stronger than women, but women also have excellence in some part.

>> or:  I know men are stronger than women, but women also excel in some part.

>> or:  I know men are stronger than women, but women are more excellent in some part
For exemple, make elaborate tactics, delicacy in all situations, etc...

>> correct
 I think the military is no longer just a symbol of men.

>> correct
 Combining men and women will have a great synergy effect.

>> correct

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