Hi Dianne, Please check my compositions~

Hi, [이름]!

I\'ve just read your composition.

And here are my corrections.

See you later.

Have a good evening!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Hello Brian,

>> Correct
 Yes, we need the D1.1 welding process certification for susceptor carts.

>> Correct

As you might know, the detailed welding requirements are not indicated on cart drawings.

>> As you might know, the detailed welding requirements are not indicated on the cart drawings.

I have 0190-72092 R2 25K susceptor cart drawing now. We will prepare all items that it is needed for the qualification as your advice.

>> I have 0190-72092 R2 25K susceptor cart drawing now and we will prepare all the items that are needed for the qualification based on your advice.

I will question you once the initial parameters are set.

>> Correct

>> Or: I will ask you once the initial parameters are set.
 Thank you so much for your support always.

>> Thank you so much for always supporting us.

>> or: I\'m always thankful for your support.

 Hi Mach,
>> Correct
We are fine if the part is not started to test yet.

>> correct

>> Or: We are good if the test didn\'t start yet.

We would like to meet your team and would like to hear your advice of the TDL test for various parts.

>> We would like to meet your team and to hear your advice about the TDL test for some various parts.

We are available all day of 2/15. I really apreciate if you can share your time on 2/15.

>> We are available all day on 2/15 and I really appreciate if you can share your time with us on this date.

 I hope that i can have a chance to meet your team this time. Windy Hwang(Vice president) and Brian Lee(sales manager) will join this time.

>>  I hope that I can have a chance to meet your team this time. Windy Hwang, our vice president and Brian Lee, our sales manager will join you this time.