hi dominic
학생이 쓴 원문
hi dominic..
long time no see^^
how have you been?^^ I had a lot of events during the vacation..
about my job position, the relationship with my foreign friend...etc..
anyway.. through these things.. what I felt are to study English is so important in my life and I really want to do this..
Also this feeling is the strongest that I've ever felt.
of course I need to try to do my best continuously..^^
Today.. we are going to start studying together again^^
We will study unit 2-10 part1, p21..
I am looking forward to talking with you^^
I hope you to be my great teacher like before^^
anyway see you at night^^
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Thank you so much for this composition. I뭢 so happy to talk to you tonight. I miss you in the class. I뭢 excited to talk to you about your activities during your vacation. See you!
-Dominic-
hi dominic..
>>Hi! Dominic,long time no see^^
>> Long time no see ^^how have you been?^^
>> How have you been?^^
I had a lot of events during the vacation..
>>Correct
>> I had a lot of activities during vacation.about my job position, the relationship with my foreign friend...etc..
>> About my job position, my relationship with my foreigner friend and etc.anyway.. through these things.. what I felt are to study English is so important in my life and I really want to do this..
>> Because of these things, I felt that studying English is so important in my life anf I really want to do it.Also this feeling is the strongest that I've ever felt.
>> This is the strongest feeling I ever felt.of course I need to try to do my best continuously..^^>> Of course, I need to try to do my best continuously..^^Today.. we are going to start studying together again^^
>> Today we are going to start studying together again^^
We will study unit 2-10 part1, p21..
>> We will start studying Unit 2-10 part 1 on page 21.I am looking forward to talking with you^^>>I뭢 looking forward to talking to you. ^^I hope you to be my great teacher like before^^
>>I hope you would be a great teacher like before.^^anyway see you at night^^
>> Anyway, see you tonight. ^^
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