hi dominic

2011-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

hi dominic.. long time no see^^ how have you been?^^ I had a lot of events during the vacation.. about my job position, the relationship with my foreign friend...etc.. anyway.. through these things.. what I felt are to study English is so important in my life and I really want to do this.. Also this feeling is the strongest that I've ever felt. of course I need to try to do my best continuously..^^ Today.. we are going to start studying together again^^ We will study unit 2-10 part1, p21.. I am looking forward to talking with you^^ I hope you to be my great teacher like before^^ anyway see you at night^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there,                 Thank you so much for this composition. I뭢 so happy to talk to you tonight. I miss you in the class. I뭢 excited to talk to you about your activities during your vacation. See you! -Dominic- hi dominic.. >>Hi! Dominic,long time no see^^ >> Long time no see ^^how have you been?^^ >> How have you been?^^  I had a lot of events during the vacation.. >>Correct >> I had a lot of activities during vacation.about my job position, the relationship with my foreign friend...etc.. >> About my job position, my relationship with my foreigner friend and etc.anyway.. through these things.. what I felt are to study English is so important in my life and I really want to do this.. >> Because of these things, I felt that  studying English  is so important in my life anf I really want to do  it.Also this feeling is the strongest that I've ever felt. >> This is the strongest feeling I ever felt.of course I need to try to do my best continuously..^^>> Of course, I need to try to do my best continuously..^^Today.. we are going to start studying together again^^ >> Today we are going to start studying together again^^ We will study unit 2-10 part1, p21.. >> We will start studying Unit 2-10 part 1 on page 21.I am looking forward to talking with you^^>>I뭢 looking forward to talking to you. ^^I hope you to be my great teacher like before^^ >>I hope you would be a great teacher like before.^^anyway see you at night^^ >> Anyway, see you tonight. ^^

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