Hi, Dominic

2011-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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Hi, Dominic I am [이름]. I [이름] go a business trip to China on this Tuesday. So I cannot participate in the Tuesday class. I [이름] go back to your class with more interesting story of China. Thank you for your kind and excellent class.^^ Regards [이름]

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Good morning [이름]! Thank you for your nice composition. Take care on your trip to China. I [이름] wait for you so we can have a wonderful class again, and tell me those interesting stories about your trip. Catch you l'ater! :)   Hi, Dominic>> Correct >>Hi Dominic,I am [이름].>>Correct >>OR: My name is [이름]. >>It\'s [이름].I [이름] go a business trip to China on this Tuesday.>> I [이름] go on a business trip to China on Tuesday.So I cannot participate in the Tuesday class.>> So I cannot attend our class on Tuesday. >>So I cannot attend our class. [Remove Tuesday because it was stated in the sentence earlier]I [이름] go back to your class with more interesting story of China.>> I [이름] go back to your class with an interesting story about China.Thank you for your kind and excellent class.^^>> CorrectRegards>>Correct>>Regards.

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