Hi, Dominic
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Dominic
I am [이름].
I [이름] go a business trip to China on this Tuesday.
So I cannot participate in the Tuesday class.
I [이름] go back to your class with more interesting story of China.
Thank you for your kind and excellent class.^^
Regards
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]! Thank you for your nice composition. Take care on your trip to China. I [이름] wait for you so we can have a wonderful class again, and tell me those interesting stories about your trip. Catch you l'ater! :)
Hi, Dominic>> Correct
>>Hi Dominic,I am [이름].>>Correct
>>OR: My name is [이름].
>>It\'s [이름].I [이름] go a business trip to China on this Tuesday.>> I [이름] go on a business trip to China on Tuesday.So I cannot participate in the Tuesday class.>> So I cannot attend our class on Tuesday.
>>So I cannot attend our class. [Remove Tuesday because it was stated in the sentence earlier]I [이름] go back to your class with more interesting story of China.>> I [이름] go back to your class with an interesting story about China.Thank you for your kind and excellent class.^^>> CorrectRegards>>Correct>>Regards.
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