Hi, Donna..^^

2012-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi, Donna. How are you? First, I am sorry that I couldn’t answer your call yesterday. I said that I had a summer vacation last week. So I delayed my class for 3 days. Yesterday was a first day I returned to my work after my summer vacation. I felt so tired and didn’t hear my phone ringing. But I adapt myself to the work today and feel so good. I will wait for your call. See you later :)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It\'s really nice of you to apologize for mising the class last night. Don\'t worry about it, I definitely understand since I know that you were busy. Anyway. I\'ll call you again later. See you in class! Take care. ^.^ T.DONNA Hi, Donna. How are you? >> Correct.First, I am sorry that I couldn’t answer your call yesterday.>> First of all, I apologize for not answering your call last night.I said that I had a summer vacation last week. So I delayed my class for 3 days.>> I told you that I was having my summer vacation last week so I delayed our classes for three days.Yesterday was a first day I returned to my work after my summer vacation. I felt so tired and didn’t hear my phone ringing. >> Yesterday was my first day at work after the summer vacation. I was so tired and I didn\'t hear my phone ringing.But I adapt myself to the work today and feel so good. >> But I adapt already to my work and so I feel good about it.I will wait for your call. See you later :) >> Correct.

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