hi dony
학생이 쓴 원문
hi!! It's me!!
I want to say to you "sorry". cause I cancled today lesson.
the one of our team member quick the job, so unexpectadly our teem decide to farewell party for him at night.
I'd like to say this news directly on a phone, but I couldn,t .
please understand my situation~
goodbye~ have a nice weekend, I miss you your voice.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I'm sad that you can't attend our class for today, because I will surely miss your voice, we can't talk for 4 straight days. =( but you dont have to say sorry, I fully understand that you need to organize farewell party for your colleague, I know it's really important for you to be with your friend, since today is his last day in your company. Anyways, advance HAPPY BIRTHDAY [이름]!! =) I hope you enjoy your special day with your "special someone" tomorrow. I'm excited to hear if your boyfriend will organize a "surprise party" for you. I will talk to you again on Monday. Enjoy your special day and your weekend. Bye [이름].
hi!! It's me!!
>> correctI want to say to you "sorry". cause I cancled today lesson.
>> I want to apologize to you because I cancelled our class for today.the one of our team member quick the job, so unexpectadly our teem decide to farewell party for him at night. >>One of our team's member surprisingly quit the job, so we decided to have farewell party for him tonightI'd like to say this news directly on a phone, but I couldn,t .
>> I really like to say this to you over the phone, but I couldn't.please understand my situation~>> correctgoodbye~ have a nice weekend, I miss you your voice.
>> goodbye~ have a nice weekend, I miss your voice.
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