hi!! dony!

2010-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Anna

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hi, dony!!! I'm [이름]!! how are you???? nice thursday~right? you know, today korea have a worldcup game that start from 8:30 p.m to 10:30 p.m. so I decide to delay today lesson. so sorry that... but today match is very important for korean.. and I bet money on this game in my company team. ok! dony I hope you and me will meet tomorrow!! good bye! thanks~

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], don't worry about holding our class today, I fully understand, I know how important worldcup is for you.  I hope that you win your bet. =) Talk to you tomorrow. =)   hi, dony!!! >>Hi Dony I'm [이름]!! how are you???? nice thursday~right? >>correct!!you know, today korea have a worldcup game that start from 8:30 p.m to 10:30 p.m. >>Here in Korea, it's worldcup day, and the game will start around 8:30PM-10:30PM.so I decide to delay today lesson. so sorry that... >> so, I decided to hold the class, I'm really sorry for that...but today match is very important for korean.. and I bet money on this game in my company team. >> but today's match is very important for all Koreans, and I bet a big amount of money in our company's team.ok! dony I hope you and me will meet tomorrow!! >> I hope that you and I will meet tomorrow.good bye! thanks~ >>correct!!    

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