hi!! dony!
학생이 쓴 원문
hi, dony!!!
I'm [이름]!! how are you???? nice thursday~right?
you know, today korea have a worldcup game that start from 8:30 p.m to 10:30 p.m.
so I decide to delay today lesson. so sorry that...
but today match is very important for korean.. and I bet money on this game in my company team.
ok! dony I hope you and me will meet tomorrow!!
good bye! thanks~
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름], don't worry about holding our class today, I fully understand, I know how important worldcup is for you. I hope that you win your bet. =) Talk to you tomorrow. =)
hi, dony!!!
>>Hi Dony
I'm [이름]!! how are you???? nice thursday~right?
>>correct!!you know, today korea have a worldcup game that start from 8:30 p.m to 10:30 p.m.
>>Here in Korea, it's worldcup day, and the game will start around 8:30PM-10:30PM.so I decide to delay today lesson. so sorry that...
>> so, I decided to hold the class, I'm really sorry for that...but today match is very important for korean.. and I bet money on this game in my company team.
>> but today's match is very important for all Koreans, and I bet a big amount of money in our company's team.ok! dony I hope you and me will meet tomorrow!!
>> I hope that you and I will meet tomorrow.good bye! thanks~
>>correct!!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.