Hi, Elisha!

Hello Seung Ho! The pleasure is all mine. I\'m very happy to see you learning something from me, and it makes me even happier to see you improving. You were able to use all the words and expressions well. Keep up the good work! By the way, I will be sending the words and idiomatic expressions on Skype. See you on Tuesday! ^^

-T. Elisha
 Why do I want to speak in English fluently?

>> correct!

 I used to ask me myself.

>> I used to ask myself.

- In this sentence, we can use the pronoun \'myself\' for emphasis.
 As follows, I have some several answers .

>> correct!

From now on, I will tell you the reasons

>> correct!
First of the reasons, when I was young, my dream was to be a global great businessman.

>> First of the reasons was that when I was young, my dream was to be a great global businessman.

- We are stating something that you\'ve wanted as a kid, and also \'global businessman\' is considered as a noun, so the word great should come before it.

So I have been thinking that I have to study English.

>> correct!

 I am use to studying English although it didn\'t spend much time for studying.

>> I am used to studying English although I didn\'t spend much time for studying.

- We use the pattern \'used to be\' in this sentence.

 It may be deeply in my subconscious even though I already have given up my dream.

>>  It may be deeply in my subconscious but I already have given up my dream.  
- We should use the conjunction \'but\' for this sentence instead of using \'even though\'.
 Another reason is for my business.

>> correct!

Sometimes I get calls from abroad.

>> correct!

When I got it, I asked them to send a email.

>>When I got it, I asked them to send an email. 

- We use \'an\' if the word next to it starts with a vowel. Vowels are A, E, I, O and U.

 After I got a email, I replied for their requirements.

>>  After I got an email, I replied for their requirements.

- The same thing applies for this sentence. We use \'an\' if the word that follows it starts with a vowel.

But It is so hard for me to chain them continuously.

>> correct!

or: >> It is difficult for me to reply to them continuously.

Nowadays my business seriously undergo a recession and many experts anticipate that it will go on for a long time.

>> Nowadays my business is undergoing a serious recession and many experts anticipate that it will go on for a long time. 

- We use the form present progressive here since the action is still and continually happening.

 But I think, if I can speak English fluently, I can make new business chances from abroad whatever it is importation or exportation.
>>  But, I think, if I can speak English fluently, I can make new business chances from abroad whether it is importation or exportation.

- It is better to use the conjunction \'whether\' in this sentence.
 The last reason is a secret.

>> correct!

No one knows the reason even my wife.

>> No one knows the reason, not even my wife.

- We are stating that nobody knows the reason, so we should say \'not even\'.

 But I tell you now.

>> But I will tell it to you now.

- You are suggesting your plan here, so we will be using \'I\'ll\' or \'I will\'.

About 5 or 6 years ago, when my son was a student of elementary school, I promise him that \'someday I will prove you that I can speak English fluently and I will never give up to study English until I can speak well.\'

>> About 5 or 6 years ago, when my son was a student in elementary school, I promised him, \'Someday, I will prove to you that I can speak English fluently and I will never give up studying English until I can speak well.\' 

My son might have forgotten this promise.

>> My son might have already forgotten about this promise.

- We always use \'has\' for the pronouns he, she or it.

But I want to keep my promise even though he already have forgotten it.

>> But I want to keep my promise even though he has already forgotten it.

- We use \'has\' for the pronouns he, she or it.

Later on, I want to say this to him \'my son, if you don\'t give up, it is not failure.

>> correct!

 Failure is in your mind.

>> correct!

Please don\'t give up easily like your father when you meet any terrible things.\'

>> correct!
 I am not a impeccable father but I want to leave my son a legacy that is strong mentality that won\'t give up.

>>  I am not an impeccable father but I want to leave a legacy to my son which is strong mentality that won\'t give up.

- We use \'an\' if the word next to it starts with a vowel. The word legacy should also come after the word leave since it is what you want to leave behind, not your son.
While I was writing this composition, I became aware of that I have recently gave up my dream that was to be a global great businessman. 

>> While I was writing this composition, I became aware of that I have recently given up my dream to become a great  global businessman. 

- When we use the present perfect form, it is followed by the past participle form of the verb.
 I will decide again.

>> correct!

Just as I wrote in the above paragraph, if I don\'t give up, it is not failure.

>> Just like what I wrote in the previous paragraphs, if I don\'t give up, it is not failure.

- It is better to use \'previous\'.

I won\'t give up, therefore I could be a global great businessman.

>> I won\'t give up, therefore I could still be a great global businessman.

-  \'Global businessman\' is considered as a noun, so the word great should come before it.

I am not late.

>> It\'s not yet too late.

- You are stating a possibility.

 I opted this challenge myself so that I will continue to study English until I can speak English well just as I made a promise to my son.

>>  I opted to challenge myself so that I will continue to study English until I can speak English well, as I promised my son.

- The word opted is usually followed by \'to\' or \'for\'.

I have had enmity against English because it is too difficult for me to learn.

>> correct!

From now on, I will regard English as a friend. 

>> correct!
 Thank you for listening to my composition.

>> correct!