Hi Ella!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi!
It's the first time to talk in the writing section with you.
Haha..
Before coming back to the office, our team had a lunch meeting with Asia Head in company. During the lunch, he asked lots of questions about Korea stock market. Difficult questions which are not easy to answer in korean he asked. wow
I should go back to the work, I got a something to do right now. sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hey Mr. [Name]^^
It's okay. Work is work. You have to prioritize it.hehehe.So I completely understand.
Anyway, you must have had a hard time explaining the stock market. It is one of the topics which I,myself, cannot explain pretty well.hahaha.You must have been sweating really hard that time.
See you Monday!
~Ella^^
MY CORRECTIONS^^:
Hi!
>>[hi Mr. [Name]! :)]It's the first time to talk in the writing section with you.
>>It's my first time to communicate with you through writing.Haha..
>>Before coming back to the office, our team had a lunch meeting with Asia Head in company.
>>Before coming back to the office, our team had a lunch meeting with the company's Asian head.
During the lunch, he asked lots of questions about Korea stock market.
>>During the lunch meeting, he asked lots of questions about the Korean stock market.
Difficult questions which are not easy to answer in korean he asked. wow
>>His questions were so difficult that it was still not easy to answer even in Korean language.Whew!I should go back to the work, I got a something to do right now. sorry.
>>CORRECT :)
>>I should go back to work right away, I got something to do urgently. Sorry.
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