Hi! Ella^^

2011-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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It was goooooood to talk with you after a long time.^^ I wrote about Korean holiday, Soernal. Please check out!^^ In Seornal holiday, most Korean people visit their family and relatives, and spend time with them. They hold a memorial service for their ancestors with foods they make.And then, they eat the foods and Toek-gouk(떡국) together. (Toekgouk is a kind of Korean soup with rice cake. we eat that in Soernal. It means getting 1 age) After the meal, children make a bow to their elders, grandparents, parents and uncle or aunt. It means their respect for the elders. And, the elders give their children money. Also, they give and take good saying to each other for coming year. Seornal is very meaningful holiday for a family in Korea.

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Dearest [이름]^^ Yeah! I really missed talking with you. hehehe. Our talks are so spontaneous and fun! Thanks for sharing those things with me. The way you celebrate the Lunar New Year seems very interesting for me. It's good to know that you respect your elders in Korea as much as we do here in the Philippines. See you Wednesday! xoxo, ~Ella   MY CORRECTIONS^^: It was goooooood to talk with you after a long time.^^ >>CORRECT JI wrote about Korean holiday, Soernal. >>CORRECT J >>I wrote about the Korean holiday, Soernal. --BETTERPlease check out!^^ >>Please check it out.In Seornal holiday, most Korean people visit their family and relatives, and spend time with them. >>CORRECT J >>In Seornal holiday, most Korean people visit their families and relatives and spend time with them. --BETTER They hold a memorial service for their ancestors with foods they make. >>CORRECT J And then, they eat the foods and Toek-gouk(떡국) together. >>CORRECT J (Toekgouk is a kind of Korean soup with rice cake. >>CORRECT J we eat that in Soernal. >>CORRECT J It means getting 1 age) >>It means getting older by 1 year. >>It means adding a year to your age.After the meal, children make a bow to their elders, grandparents, parents and uncle or aunt. >>CORRECT J >>After the meal, children bow to their elders like the grandparents, parents, uncles, or aunts. --BETTER It means their respect for the elders. >>It뭩 a sign of respect for the elders. >>It뭩 a way for them to show respect to the elders. And, the elders give their children money. >>CORRECT J Also, they give and take good saying to each other for coming year. >>Also, they say good things to each other for the coming year. Seornal is very meaningful holiday for a family in Korea. >>CORRECT J  

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