Hi Ella

2011-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm sorry , I was sleepy when you called to me yesterday. I'm tired these days without special reason. Could you shout me 'fighting' ^^.

강사 첨삭

Good day Mr. [이름]! I think that maybe the reason why you feel sleepy and tired is because of the weather. Sometimes, if it's raining and gloomy all the time it makes us feel drowsy and it's so difficult to get off our beds, right?  It's alright though. Don't worry about it . I hope you'd feel a lot better as soon as the rain stops. FIGHTING!   I'm sorry , I was sleepy when you called to me yesterday. >>I'm sorry. I was sleepy when you called me yesterday. >>I'm sorry. I was already asleep when you called me yesterday. >>I'm sorry. I was already sleeping when you called me yesterday.I'm tired these days without special reason. >> CORRECTCould you shout me 'fighting' ^^. >>Could you help me out by shouting, "fighting!".

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