Hi Ella

2011-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

Today was another rainy one. I feel depressed in bad weather these days. If it is rainy, baseball game be canceled. So I can't watch baseball which I like and I can't ride a bicycle with my children outside. I hope I can see the sun.^^

강사 첨삭

Yes, I agree with you Mr. [이름]. I also hate the rainy days. I don't like getting my feet wet. Let's just hope that the sun will come out soon. Anyway, you can hear my "sunny" voice later.hehehehe. So cheer up!!!  Today was another rainy one. >>Today was another rainy day.I feel depressed in bad weather these days. >>I feel depressed due to the bad weather these days.If it is rainy, baseball game be canceled. >>If it is rainy, the baseball game can be cancelled.So I can't watch baseball which I like and I can't ride a bicycle with my children outside.>>CORRECT^^I hope I can see the sun.^^ >>CORRECT^^

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