Hi Ella

2011-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning!! It wan shinny when I got up this morning. I think that God granted my wish which I hoped yesterday. The sunlight was too bright for my eyes after a long time. I am happy now by the expectations which I can watch the baseball game.

강사 첨삭

A bright and sunny day to you Mr. [이름]! Finally, you can enjoy your summer even if it's about to end ^^. Nice to know that the sun finally came out. Hope you have lots of fun. Take advantage of this day!   Good morning!! >>Correct!It wan shinny when I got up this morning. >>It was sunny when I got up this morning.I think that God granted my wish which I hoped yesterday. >>I think that God granted my wish yesterday.The sunlight was too bright for my eyes after a long time. >>Correct!I am happy now by the expectations which I can watch the baseball game. >>I am hapy now with the expectations that I could watch the baseball game.

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