Hi Ella

2011-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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My children had pajama party at the Kindergarten yesterday. So I had the plan I meet my wife outside and I canceled this class. I had happy time with my wife after a long time. After marriage We could not have time alone. We went to the drinking house and We talked about our future or family. I will don't forget yesterday's memorize. I'm so happy today.^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr.[이름]! I am so happy to hear that you had fun with your wife yesterday. I hope you will have more time together to give your more good memories. Here are your corrections. T.Ella   My children had pajama party at the Kindergarten yesterday. >My children had a pajama party at the kindergarten school yesterday.So I had the plan I meet my wife outside and I canceled this class. >>So I planned to meet my wife out and I cancelled this class.I had happy time with my wife after a long time. >>Correct! >>Or: I had fun with my wife after a long time.After marriage We could not have time alone. >>After we were married, we didn't have time alone.We went to the drinking house and We talked about our future or family. >>Correct!I will don't forget yesterday's memorize. >>I will never forget the memory we had yesterday.I'm so happy today.^^ >>Correct!

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