Hi Ella
학생이 쓴 원문
My children had pajama party at the Kindergarten yesterday.
So I had the plan I meet my wife outside and I canceled this class.
I had happy time with my wife after a long time.
After marriage We could not have time alone.
We went to the drinking house and We talked about our future or family.
I will don't forget yesterday's memorize.
I'm so happy today.^^
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Hello Mr.[이름]!
I am so happy to hear that you had fun with your wife yesterday. I hope you will have more time together to give your more good memories. Here are your corrections.
T.Ella
My children had pajama party at the Kindergarten yesterday.
>My children had a pajama party at the kindergarten school yesterday.So I had the plan I meet my wife outside and I canceled this class.
>>So I planned to meet my wife out and I cancelled this class.I had happy time with my wife after a long time.
>>Correct!
>>Or: I had fun with my wife after a long time.After marriage We could not have time alone.
>>After we were married, we didn't have time alone.We went to the drinking house and We talked about our future or family.
>>Correct!I will don't forget yesterday's memorize.
>>I will never forget the memory we had yesterday.I'm so happy today.^^
>>Correct!
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