Hi Ella

2011-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

It was cool this morning. So I took off summer clothes(short-sleeves) and put on fall clothes(long sleeves). Anyway I can seem to watch the baseball game I like due to a good weather. I like the fall.^^

강사 첨삭

Oh! I envy you, Mr. [이름]. I wish our country has four seasons too so I can experience those things. Enjoy the game if there is any. See you later!   It was cool this morning. >>CORRECT^^So I took off summer clothes(short-sleeves) and put on fall clothes(long sleeves). >>CORRECT^^Anyway I can seem to watch the baseball game I like due to a good weather. >>Anyway, it seems like I can watch the baseball game due to the good weather.I like the fall.^^ >>CORRECT^^

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