Hi Erine. You can understand the meaning of "trivial"(i intended) is a sort of expression of modesty
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I like the movie "Good Will Hunting"
It released 1997, when I was high school student.
It is a American movie. The main actor is Matt Damon. And lately. suicided famous actor Robin Williams.
Will is a genius person. But he spends his time not thinking of carefully. he always spends his time with his friends playing a baseball or fighting other people and drinking alcohol. He did not realize his potential ability. One professor know the his ability. And He suggested Will for the better life. But Will did not open his mind. Because He had a hurt in his mind by his stepfather in the childhood. The professor let Matt meet a psychiatrist for treating his hurt mind. Because he really loves his capacity. He want to inform his speciality to the world. The real story of the movie is processing healing of Will via the meeting with psychiatrist Robin Williams. At last, Will recovers his inner problems. He can love himself. He can live real life not to denying his extraordinary ability.
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Hello there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for explaining your idea using the word \"trivial\".^^ I understand it fully now.
I also want to thank you for telling me about this movie. I didn\'t know that it was Matt Damon
who played the important role in this movie.
Later, I will try to watch it then!^^
Have a great day!
~~Teacher Erine~~
I like the movie \"Good Will Hunting\">> I like the movie entitled \"Good Will Hunting\".
It released 1997, when I was high school student.
It released 1997, when I was high school student.
>> I was released when I was a high school student in 1997.
It is a American movie.
It is a American movie.
>> It is an American movie.
The main actor is Matt Damon.
>> Correct.
And lately. suicided famous actor Robin Williams.
>> And the late Robin Williams, a famous actor who recently died.
Will is a genius person.
Will is a genius person.
>> Will, who was portrayed by Matt Damon, is a genius person.
But he spends his time not thinking of carefully.
>>Correct.
he always spends his time with his friends playing a baseball or fighting other people and drinking alcohol.
>> He always spends his time with his friends playing baseball, fighting with other people and drinking alcohol.
He did not realize his potential ability.
>> Correct.
One professor know the his ability.
>> One professor knows his ability.
And He suggested Will for the better life.
>> He suggested Will to have a better life.
But Will did not open his mind.
>> However, Will did not open his mind.
Because He had a hurt in his mind by his stepfather in the childhood.
>> Because his mind was hurt/abused by his stepfather in his childhood.
The professor let Matt meet a psychiatrist for treating his hurt mind.
>> The professor let Will meet a psychiatrist to treat his mind.
Because he really loves his capacity.
>> Correct.
He want to inform his speciality to the world.
>> He wants to let the world about his specialties.
The real story of the movie is processing healing of Will via the meeting with psychiatrist Robin Williams.
>> The real story of the movie focused on the healing process of heal when he met the psychiatrist that was played by Robin Williams.
At last, Will recovers his inner problems.
>> Correct.
He can love himself.
>> Correct.
He can live real life not to denying his extraordinary ability.
>> He can live a real life without denying his extraordinary abilities.
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