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My experiences abroad I had stayed in the Philippines for three months. While I had been staying there, I had studied English and I had done volunteer service in orphanage. And I had stayed in Australia for three months. While I had been staying there, I had studied English also and I had traveled by walk to many places. So I could make many friends of several countries. My experiences in the military service I had worked in military service as a driver soldier. So I could drive many kinds of cars and special vehicles like a tank. And I could repair them also. So I could learn about cars much during the military service.

My experiences abroad >> correctI had stayed in the Philippines for three months. >> I stayed in the Philippines for three months. While I had been staying there, I had studied English and I had done volunteer service in orphanage. >> During my stay there, I studied English and done volunteer services in an orphanage. And I had stayed in Australia for three months. >> I stayed in Australia for three months. While I had been staying there, I had studied English also and I traveled by walk to many places. >> While I was there, I studied English also and went to many places. So I could make many friends of several countries. >> So I could make many foreign friends. My experiences in the military service >> Correct!I had worked in military service as a driver soldier. >> I worked in the military service as a driver.  So I could drive many kinds of cars and special vehicles like a tank. >> So I can drive many kinds of cars and special vehicles like a tank. And I could repair them also. So I could learn about cars much during the military service.   >> I can also repair them. So I learned much about cars during my military service.