hi fey

2011-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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What are my short and long term objectives in GM KOREA I will device many creative technologies of safety and convenience for human. So I will make customers be satisfied and I will develop GM KOREA. I will be a great leader of a team to deign these technologies. And then I will let all team members express their fresh ideas freely. So I promise to make your company the world best company. The last comment and my aspiration in GM KOREA I’m a person who makes a smile whenever I think cars. I'm a person who really likes cars and I really want to work for making cars joyfully with all co-workers in GM KOREA. I will make very safe and convenient cars that I want to take people who I love.

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What are my short and long term objectives in GM KOREA? >> CorrectI will device many creative technologies of safety and convenience for human. >> I will create/invent many gadgets for human뭩 safety and convenience.  So I will make customers be satisfied and I will develop GM KOREA. >> I will make my customers satisfied and will help develop GM Korea. I will be a great leader of a team to deign these technologies. >> I will be a great team leader in designing new technologies. And then I will let all team members express their fresh ideas freely. >> I will also let all my team members express their ideas freely. So I promise to make your company the world best company.>> I promise to make our company the best. The last comment and my aspiration in GM KOREA >> CorrectI’m a person who makes a smile whenever I think cars. >> I뭢 a person who smiles whenever I think of cars. I'm a person who really likes cars and I really want to work for making cars joyfully with all co-workers in GM KOREA. >> I뭢 a person who really likes cars and I really want to make cars gladly with my co-workers in GM KOREA. I will make very safe and convenient cars that I want to take people who I love. >> I will make safe and convenient cars that people will love.

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