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I was participated in the contest of making driverless car. I was in charge of analyzing the data of the car in driving such as speed and location by using MATLAB. But I was not capable of using MATLAB. I had to improve the MATLAB skill by myself at last night after finishing group work or at dawn and I was improving the skill more and more. Finally, I could use it to solve the problem that the car got out of the rout that we set up.
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I was participated in the contest of making driverless car.
>>> I participated in the contest of making a driverless car.
I was in charge of analyzing the data of the car in driving such as speed and location by using MATLAB.
>>> Correct
>>> OR: I was in charge of analyzing the data of the car in driving such as speed and location by using the MATLAB.
But I was not capable of using MATLAB.
>>> Correct
>>> OR: But I was not capable of using the MATLAB.
I had to improve the MATLAB skill by myself at last night after finishing group work or at dawn and I was improving the skill more and more.
>>> I had to improve the MATLAB skill by myself at the last night after finishing the group work at dawn and I was improving my skill more and more.
Finally, I could use it to solve the problem that the car got out of the rout that we set up.
>>> Finally, I could use my skill to solve the problem whenever the car got out of the route that we set up.
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