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Although we had to work in the bad condition such as muggy weather and tight schedule for over a month, I could not feel fatigue because it was exciting to improve the performance of our car. Finally, we succeeded in make the car drive by itself as we had strived for that. At the moment of the first success I got pleasure and I shall not forget that moment. Although we didn’t win the championship in the contest in spite of our long time and much effort, I never regret participating in the contest because I did my best for that and I devoted it my passion. And moreover it was the meaningful time that made me finds my dream of an engineer in the field of car

Although we had to work in the bad condition such as muggy weather and tight schedule for over a month, I could not feel fatigue because it was exciting to improve the performance of our car. >>> Correct  Finally, we succeeded in make the car drive by itself as we had strived for that. >>> Finally, we succeeded in making the car drive by itself as we had strived for that. At the moment of the first success I got pleasure and I shall not forget that moment. >>> Correct >>>OR: At the moment of the first success I was pleased and I will not forget that moment. Although we didn’t win the championship in the contest in spite of our long time and much effort, I never regret participating in the contest because I did my best for that and I devoted it my passion. >>> Although we didn뭪 win the championship in the contest in spite of spending a long time and much effort, I never regret participating in the contest because I did my best and I was devoted with my passion. And moreover it was the meaningful time that made me finds my dream of an engineer in the field of car >>> Moreover, it was the meaningful time that made me find my dream of becoming an engineer in the field of cars.