Hi, Gabby.
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What are the things that you do to relax.
I stop talking and try to concentrate on myself, because I may make some mistakes, decide rashly and above all, hurt someone.
So, I try to organize my thoughts. I usually walk or keep a diary in English to organize my thoughts. And I sometimes run, listen to a music and sing a song to forget something to bother me. Also, I drink a hot cup of tea such as chamomile, darjeeling and citrus. It can help my body to be warm and clear my mind. In addition, I chat with my friends.
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Hi [이름] [이름]! It\'s great to know that you like music too. Great work. :)
- T. Gabby :)
I stop talking and try to concentrate on myself, because I may make some mistakes, decide rashly and above all, hurt someone.
>> Correct.
So, I try to organize my thoughts.
So, I try to organize my thoughts.
>> Correct.
I usually walk or keep a diary in English to organize my thoughts.
>> Correct.
And I sometimes run, listen to a music and sing a song to forget something to bother me.
>> And I sometimes run, listen to music and sing a song to forget the things that bother me.
Also, I drink a hot cup of tea such as chamomile, darjeeling and citrus.
>> Correct.
It can help my body to be warm and clear my mind.
>> Correct.
In addition, I chat with my friends.
>> Correct.
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