Hi, Gabby.
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Please share about your hobbies.
My hobbies were to read English novels and to do weight training. Nowadays, I study English very hard. My head would be spinning if I read extra English novel. And I can\'t do weight training now because of my injured arm. So, I have hobbies to play computer game a little and to sing a pop song by Ed Sheeran.
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Hi [이름] [이름]. Thanks for working on your homework.
- T. Gabby :)
My hobbies were to read English novels and to do weight training.
>> Correct.
Nowadays, I study English very hard.
>> Correct.
My head would be spinning if I read extra English novel.
>> Correct.
And I can\'t do weight training now because of my injured arm.
>> Correct.
So, I have hobbies to play computer game a little and to sing a pop song by Ed Sheeran.
>> So, I just play computer games sometimes and sing pop songs by Ed Sheeran.
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