Hi Gemma
학생이 쓴 원문
This is for you hahaha
My best friend made this Kimbob for me.
She cooks every food so well.
She always gives me delicious food whiich she cooks.
I love her food indeed.
Sometimes I feel that I love her food more than her. hahaha
As you see the photo, there are many vegetables eggs, tuna and cheese inside.
I wish she cook Kimbob again. hihihi
강사 첨삭
Oh my gosh! It looks tasty! I just hope I could make it perfectly the next time I\'ll try to make it! I guess that\'s perfect for picnic or anywhere we go. It\'s a finger bite food whenever we\'re hungry! Cheers to the one who invented Kimbap! Hahaha! I remember when I was in a Language School and there was a Korean grandma who happened to be the chef in the cafeteria. She always let me tasted all she cooks for the students! I tasted a lot of Korean food for the first time because she just wanted to give me some. And oh, actually she loves feeding me with her hand. Hahaha! She enjoys doing that, either do I. I miss her all of a sudden. Hahaha! And by the way, here\'s the gim! They\'re a lot! Hahaha!
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