Hi Gemmar
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my oppinion, It depends on how much older family members dedicated themselves to their younger family members.
If the parents disowned with their childrends at any reason for a long time therefore, the childrends have lived by themselves without suporting from their parents, Do they have to take care of their parents ?
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]~! ^^ It\'s always great to talk to you in both spoken and written English hahaha. Anyway, I know you are seriously preparing for your trip to Saipan so keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
In my oppinion, It depends on how much older family members dedicated themselves to their younger family members.
>>> In my opinion, it depends on how much the elderly members dedicated themselves to their younger family members.
If the parents disowned with their childrends at any reason for a long time therefore, the childrends have lived by themselves without suporting from their parents,
If the parents disowned with their childrends at any reason for a long time therefore, the childrends have lived by themselves without suporting from their parents,
>>> If the parents disowned their children at any reason for a long time therefore, children have lived by themselves without any support from their parents.
Do they have to take care of their parents ?
>>> CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.