Hi Gemmar

2022-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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In our class, I told you wrong word about Synesthesia. I wanted to tell you the word \'sapce perception\' Women has a little space perception campared with man. I also feel hard when I park my car because of lacking of space perception!!! But We, women are alright. we have another sense which man do not have, The sixth sense ~~~ hihihihi.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]! Thanks for the follow-up details for our discussions. Yes, space perception. My best friend is really good at it. Hahaha. She can park so easily. I hope I can do that too if I started to learn how to drive. You can do it! Practice makes perfect hahaha! By the way, I wonder what the sixth sense is. Hahaha! Is it COMMON SENSE? HAHAHA

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

In our class, I told you wrong word about Synesthesia.

>>> In our class, I told you the wrong word, synesthesia.
I wanted to tell you the word \'space perception\'

>>> CORRECT
Women has a little space perception campared with man.

>>> Women have a little space perception compared to man.
I also feel hard when I park my car because of lacking of space perception!!!

>>> I also have difficulties when I park my car because of the lack of space perception!!!
But we, women are alright.

>>> But us, women are alright.

we have another sense which man do not have,

>>> We have another sense which man do not have.
The sixth sense ~~~ hihihihi.

>>> CORRECT

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