Hi Gemmar
학생이 쓴 원문
Here is a funny story which I like
A doctor, a lawyer, a little boy and a priest were out for a sunday afternoon flight on a samll private plane
Suddenly, the plane developed engine trouble
In spite of the best efforts of the pilot, the plane started to go down
Finally, the pilot grabbed a parachute, yelled to the passangers that they had better jump, and balled out
Unfortunately, there were only three parachutes remaining
The doctor grabbed one and said \" I\'m a doctor, I save lives, so I must live\" and jumped out
The lawyer then said \" I\'m a lawyer and lawyers are the smartest people in the world, I deserve to live\"
He also grabbed a parachute and jumped
The priest looked at the little boy and said
\"My son, I\'ve lived a long and full life, You are young and have your whole life ahead of you Take the last parachute and live in peace\"
The little boy handed the parachute back to the priest and said
\" Not to worry Father, The Smartest man in the world just took off with my bac pack\"
HAHA
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름] I had so much fun reading your story. Hahaha! That was so funny!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Here is a funny story which I like.
>>> CORRECT
A doctor, a lawyer, a little boy and a priest were out for a Sunday afternoon flight on a small private plane.
A doctor, a lawyer, a little boy and a priest were out for a Sunday afternoon flight on a small private plane.
>>> CORRECT
Suddenly, the plane developed engine trouble
Suddenly, the plane developed engine trouble
>>> Suddenly, the plane had developed an engine trouble.
>>> Suddenly, there a problem occurred in the engine.
In spite of the best efforts of the pilot, the plane started to go down.
In spite of the best efforts of the pilot, the plane started to go down.
>>> CORRECT
Finally, the pilot grabbed a parachute, yelled to the passengers that they had better jump, and balled out.
Finally, the pilot grabbed a parachute, yelled to the passengers that they had better jump, and balled out.
>>> CORRECT
Unfortunately, there were only three parachutes remaining.
Unfortunately, there were only three parachutes remaining.
>>> CORRECT
The doctor grabbed one and said \" I\'m a doctor, I save lives, so I must live\" and jumped out.
The doctor grabbed one and said \" I\'m a doctor, I save lives, so I must live\" and jumped out.
>>> CORRECT
The lawyer then said \" I\'m a lawyer and lawyers are the smartest people in the world, I deserve to live\"
The lawyer then said \" I\'m a lawyer and lawyers are the smartest people in the world, I deserve to live\"
>>> CORRECT
He also grabbed a parachute and jumped.
He also grabbed a parachute and jumped.
>>> CORRECT
The priest looked at the little boy and said,
The priest looked at the little boy and said,
>>> CORRECT
\"My son, I\'ve lived a long and full life,
\"My son, I\'ve lived a long and full life,
>>> CORRECT
You are young and have your whole life ahead of you.
>>> CORRECT
Take the last parachute and live in peace\"
>>> CORRECT
The little boy handed the parachute back to the priest and said,
The little boy handed the parachute back to the priest and said,
>>> CORRECT
\" Don\'t worry Father, the smartest man in the world just took off with my back pack\"
\" Don\'t worry Father, the smartest man in the world just took off with my back pack\"
>>> CORRECT
HAHA
HAHA
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