Hi Gemmar
학생이 쓴 원문
Did you finish your all classes?
I wish you have a good time when you go out for choosing furniture for wedding.
I like shopping though I don\'t buy.
If I am near from you , I really want to go with you to see what you choose.
My husband also likes going to shopping. sometimes I feel he enjoys shopping more than I do.
But these days, I use more the internet mall than I go to a store .
As everybody knows, I am not satisfied with the goods shopped by the internet mall sometimes.
But It is so convinient. ^^
Anyway, why don\'t you have a cool drink at a nice Cafeteria after your shopping?
강사 첨삭
Hi again Ms. [이름]! Yes! I\'m done with my classes. I am more on doing online shopping either. My husband won\'t allow me to do that though if I have to buy a furniture. He would always want me to see for myself. I like shopping with my husband so much because I could let him buy whatever I want. Hahaha! I\'m not fond of branded items though so he doesn\'t worry about buying stuff for me. Hahaha! Actually after shopping I want to visit a Korean restaurant I feel like starving to death. Hahaha I want to grab some Koreans snacks too however, they\'re really expensive here. Maybe, I\'ll get one only. Hahaha
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Did you finish your all classes?
>>> Did you finish all your classes?
I wish you have a good time when you go out for choosing furniture for wedding.
>>> I wish you\'ll have good time choosing for furniture for the wedding.
I like shopping though I don\'t buy.
I like shopping though I don\'t buy.
>>> I like shopping though I don\'t like buying stuff.
If I am near from you , I really want to go with you to see what you choose.
If I am near from you , I really want to go with you to see what you choose.
>>> If I were near you , I really want to go with you to see what you\'ll choose.
My husband also likes going shopping.
My husband also likes going shopping.
>>>CORRECT
sometimes I feel he enjoys shopping more than I do.
>>> Sometimes I think, he enjoys shopping more than I do.
But these days, I use more the internet mall than I go to a store .
But these days, I use more the internet mall than I go to a store .
>>> But these days, I do online shopping more going to the store .
As everybody knows, I am not satisfied with the goods shopped by the internet mall sometimes.
As everybody knows, I am not satisfied with the goods shopped by the internet mall sometimes.
>>> As everybody knows, I am sometimes not satisfied with the goods shopped on the internet .
But it is so convenient. ^^
>>>CORRECT
Anyway, why don\'t you have a cool drink at a nice Cafeteria after shopping?
Anyway, why don\'t you have a cool drink at a nice Cafeteria after shopping?
>>>CORRECT
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